In a barren land of eternal leaf-bare swept by frozen winds, four Clans of feral cats struggle to survive. Prey is scarce, warmth is almost unknown, as are the forests and sun that they hear of only in stories. Now, IceClan of the waters, SnowClan of the pines, FrostClan of the ice plains and BlizzardClan of the mountains must fight for life...or freeze...
Weather: Pale grey clouds are gathering on the horizon; there is the scent of rain hanging in the air. There is still some time before the clouds are blown above the Clans, though, and it is fairly light. The storm may strengthen later on.
Joined: Jun 2006 Gender: Female Posts: 193 Location: IceClan
Icystar~IceClan « Thread Started on Jun 24, 2006, 10:22am »
Name: Icystar (Icypelt is her warrior name)
Gender: She-cat
Age: 20 moons
Clan: IceClan
Physical Description: Icystar is a long, slender she-cat. She is long legged and has a beautiful pure white long-haired coat. Her eyes are a lovly shade of royal blue. She has long claws, and a very long, and thin tail.
Personality: Icystar is a very kind, and mellow cat. She is very agreeable, and almost never argues with her Clan. But if you get her very angry, she tends to snap, and scorn a lot. But it very rare that you'll see her like that, she a is a very gentle cat.
History: Icystar was born in IceClan. Her parents were both well-respected members of IceClan. Her siblings, Driftkit and Rainkit both dead from greencough when they were two moons old; she never really remembered her brother and sister. Four moons past, it was time for the elder kit to become an apprentice. But that night a bear attack the patrol her father was in, killing him, leaving the other badly injured. Icypaw mourn her father, and buried him next to the White Isle, he loved to go there and hunt. Three moons later, Icypaw was training with her beloved mentor, Dawnsky, when a avalanche struck the she-cat, burring her in snow, leaving her breathless. Four moons later it was the night of the she-cats' warrior naming, she received her warrior name, Icypelt. Three moons later, the elder deputy died from old age, that night, Icypelt was appointed deputy. Two and a half moons later, then old tom was killed in a battle against BlizzardClan, leaving Icypelt the new leader of IceClan.
IC: The young apprentice staring into the sky, then look in front of her, a very small hawk was soaring above, and a small snow rabbit feeding on some dead roots. Icypaw smirked. When the time is right... the apprentice thought, watching the hawk circle the rabbit. The hawk swooped down, Now! she hissed to herself, leaping toward the hawk. Hawks talons tore into the rabbits flesh, killing it. The white she-cat swiftly unleashed her claws, raking them into the birds' feathery wings, it cried. She bit down into its neck, sending a death bit. The hawk flapped one of its wings, then died. The young apprentice sniff the air, scenting out where her mentor was. Suddenly there was a loud cry. "Dawnsky!" the snowy white she-cat gasped, running toward the wailed. The white apprenitce run as fast could, herlong legs hitting the snowy ground, throwing some fallen snowflake into the air. Icypaw stop, "Dawnsky?" the apprentice mewed, looking around for the pale gray she-cat. She sniffed the air again, then shook her head, "Dawnsky!" she wailed, running toward a scent where is seem freshest. The she-cat swiftly started digging into the white snow, then stop. She hit a gray flank. She back again way, and shook her head "No..." she wailed in a whisper "No, Dawnsky!" she stepped back and dug more, then pulled the warrior out from the lush white snow, "No," she murmured, buring her nose in her mentors' cold flank, "No!"
-misty- Leader Leader of SnowClan member is offline
Joined: Jun 2006 Gender: Female Posts: 368 Location: Right behind you! (:
Re: Icystar~IceClan « Reply #1 on Jun 25, 2006, 5:21am »
Nice bio...but you hafta add more onto the physical decription and personality. And if you really want to be a leader, you should add a bit more onto everything...^^
Do you know how when you let someone down you get this sick feeling in your stomach? You see mirrored in her eyes a reflection of your own misery. Don't let anyone down. Mistystar~Snow Leader Frozenmoon~Blizz Warrior Moonpaw~Ice Apprentice Katzen~Loner Taintedblood~Frost Warrior
Do you know how when you let someone down you get this sick feeling in your stomach? You see mirrored in her eyes a reflection of your own misery. Don't let anyone down. Mistystar~Snow Leader Frozenmoon~Blizz Warrior Moonpaw~Ice Apprentice Katzen~Loner Taintedblood~Frost Warrior